Author Topic: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition (Read 3187848 times)

Dagi · « **Reply #1570 on:** August 18, 2007, 02:03:33 pm »

Quote from: spiceylife on August 17, 2007, 11:04:12 pm

Hope I can do it justice, and I really hope Dagi might write a part three.

If nobody minds if I write Porn Without Plot

, (because that´s all I can think of at the moment

), and if you are patient enough to wait a few days then I will try to contribute...

Dagi

Dagi · « **Reply #1571 on:** August 18, 2007, 02:05:56 pm »

Quote from: rnmina on August 18, 2007, 05:49:12 am

I need to tell all the authors on this thread how I've enjoyed reading your work. I am on page 50,,, i think...with many more pages to go.
TY again,
mina

So nice to hear that you are enjoying our stories! Thanks so much for letting us know! And feel free to write us something steamy

.

Dagi

Dagi · « **Reply #1572 on:** August 18, 2007, 02:11:10 pm »

Quote from: garycottle on August 18, 2007, 11:22:32 am

And who is the tanned blond kid with the narrow hips? MMM Are you trying to drive me over the edge?

Gary

Dagi · « **Reply #1573 on:** August 18, 2007, 02:17:02 pm »

Quote from: spiceylife on August 18, 2007, 06:19:34 am

You crack me up, Dagi! This is hilarious. I identify with poor Ennis here - ? ? ? My daughter tries to teach me stuff and I always have this - ? ? ? - hanging over my head!

Daughter : Remember I taught you this already, mom? Just a few days ago...

Mother : ? ? ?

I just laughed my ass off the whole way through this one. This line really sounds like Jack with his Texan accent :

I thought this was you, Dagi, what with the swearing and all... Lol. I swear like a sailor sometimes! Is it Gary?

I wasn´t sure if this was going to be funny for others too, I actually wrote it for Gary

. Glad you enjoyed reading it! And I admit: I´m swearing a lot. A LOT. My four year old son already says fuck and shit...

Dagi

Luvlylittlewing · « **Reply #1574 on:** August 18, 2007, 02:22:45 pm »

Quote from: Susiebell on August 18, 2007, 05:18:12 am

I'm just stunned by all your superb stories littlewing .... this one had me intrigued from the first sentence. I'd love to read something much longer from you, a novel perhaps ... if you really had time to spread your wings, Lord knows what wonderful places you would take us ... brilliant!

Susie

SusieBaby, this is the nicest thing I've ever heard. Thank you so much!

Luvlylittlewing · « **Reply #1575 on:** August 18, 2007, 02:24:19 pm »

Quote from: spiceylife on August 18, 2007, 05:33:20 am

Susie, thank you so much for showing us your beautiful holiday photos. Are you the photographer? The shots are wonderful. Of all your photos, as much as I love Cornwall, this one of your three children is my most favorite. What a great family snap! You should put this one on the wall. Your children are just gorgeous! I can see why you're such a proud mom, Susie! Lovely. Oh, and Graham and Charlie are very cute and handsome, too! Your hubby does look a bit like that guy from Dallas, you know...

Your photos of Cornwall brought back so many memories! I've been to Cornwall, Penzance, St Ives and Land's End. It's countryside like I've never seen before. I love it. And the houses and villages are so picturesque - quite stunning. Your country fascinates me, Susie. Maybe it's my convict ancestry! From there, we went to Stonehenge and Bath and many other stone circles and castle ruins. You're so lucky to be steeped in that much ancient history, SusieBaby - I wish I'd been an archaeologist!

Again, thank you for sharing your terrific photos.

Spicey, you're so lucky! Right now I can only see these places in my dreams!

Luvlylittlewing · « **Reply #1576 on:** August 18, 2007, 02:26:26 pm »

Quote from: Toycoon on August 18, 2007, 10:25:29 am

Jack Twist's very first Pride Parade! Terrific Littlewing! I don't know how you do it; how do you come up with so many great tales?

I take them from real life. Everything I see inspires me, it seems.

Luvlylittlewing · « **Reply #1577 on:** August 18, 2007, 02:27:30 pm »

Quote from: garycottle on August 18, 2007, 11:22:32 am

Beautiful, littlewing. And you're so right, Jack had such a love for life, and he wanted to celebrate it. It's so great that he was allowed to do that for a few minutes in his fevered dream. And who is the tanned blond kid with the narrow hips? MMM Are you trying to drive me over the edge?

Gary

Thanks, Gary! I'm not sure who the young blond guy is, but I think he might reappear..

Dagi · « **Reply #1578 on:** August 18, 2007, 03:11:03 pm »

Quote from: moremojo on August 18, 2007, 01:20:13 pm

Something Precious by moremojo

............... there was something about Ennis, something different from all the other guys Jack had known and sometimes played with, that inspired a deep tenderness in his heart that was almost unbearable in its sweetness...

Scott, you write so beautifully! What you wrote was exactly what one could see in Jack´s eyes.....a deep tenderness that was almost unbearable in its sweetness... Thank you for this tender moment!

Dagi

Dagi · « **Reply #1579 on:** August 18, 2007, 04:02:52 pm »

Quote from: garycottle on August 18, 2007, 02:00:33 pm

Lonnie: Summer of ‘62

He went directly to the boy, fell in front of him, and took the boy’s turgid member into his mouth.

I´m starting to think you are doing that on purpose

.

You give us a good explanation for Jack´s acting all cool the following summer when it was time for him and Ennis to part.

Have I mentioned lately that I love your writing?

Dagi

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