Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3285496 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1350 on: July 17, 2006, 04:25:35 pm »
Every night together was heavenly bliss,
When two cowboys would join for a kiss,
Hearts pounding, bodies tingling, sweat dripping
Would lead to some unzipping and stripping
The passion so strong and way too hot to miss!

Xcellent!  :)


In '63, they were eager, young at heart



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1351 on: July 17, 2006, 04:28:37 pm »
In '63, they were eager, young at heart
But by summer's end they had to part  :'(
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1352 on: July 17, 2006, 04:37:44 pm »
In '63, they were eager, young at heart
But by summer's end they had to part .
Feeling so bad they found nothing to say,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1353 on: July 17, 2006, 04:50:25 pm »
In '63, they were eager, young at heart
But by summer's end they had to part .
Feeling so bad they found nothing to say
And found that it was harder that way
"Look too often at those hills, lie too long beside those rippling rivers, and you may think you are hearing a love song, when actually it is a death song." Larry McMurtry, Brokeback Mountain: Story to Screenplay.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1354 on: July 17, 2006, 04:53:37 pm »
In '63, they were eager, young at heart
But by summer's end they had to part .
Feeling so bad they found nothing to say
And found that it was harder that way
Ah ... life can be a mean ol' fart!


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1355 on: July 17, 2006, 05:41:09 pm »
Better start a new one:



You're late, Jack told Ennis and grinned



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1356 on: July 17, 2006, 05:44:49 pm »
You're late, Jack told Ennis and grinned
I couldn't wait, so me 'n my right hand've sinned!


 :P


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1357 on: July 17, 2006, 05:56:59 pm »
 :o  :o  :o

 ;)

 :P


You're late, Jack told Ennis and grinned
I couldn't wait, so me 'n my right hand've sinned!
But don't worry, you'll very soon see

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1358 on: July 17, 2006, 06:09:35 pm »
:o  :o  :o

 ;)

 :P

 ;D

You're late, Jack told Ennis and grinned
I couldn't wait, so me 'n my right hand've sinned!
But don't worry, you'll very soon see
Just how much passionate fire I got in me!


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1359 on: July 17, 2006, 06:55:15 pm »
You're late, Jack told Ennis and grinned
I couldn't wait, so me 'n my right hand've sinned!
But don't worry, you'll very soon see
Just how much passionate fire I got in me!
Give me a minute, then I'll have you pinned!