Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1050546 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #500 on: June 07, 2006, 03:01:29 pm »
Jack red-lined it to his true love's side
He gave a damn about Ennis' bride.
He couldn't picture Ennis with her,
On to the motel, he wanted to slither,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #501 on: June 07, 2006, 03:20:53 pm »
Jack red-lined it to his true love's side
He gave a damn about Ennis' bride.
He couldn't picture Ennis with her,
On to the motel, he wanted to slither,
In a few moments, upon Ennis he sat astride.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #502 on: June 07, 2006, 03:54:33 pm »
Ennis, not big on endearments, called Jack "Little darlin",

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #503 on: June 07, 2006, 06:48:50 pm »
Ennis, not big on endearments, called Jack "Little darlin",
He was hot and bothered; his blood rilin'.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #504 on: June 08, 2006, 04:50:22 am »
Ennis, not big on endearments, called Jack "Little darlin",
He was hot and bothered; his blood rilin'.
Words punched through gritted teeth
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #505 on: June 08, 2006, 05:21:30 am »
Ennis, not big on endearments, called Jack "Little darlin",
He was hot and bothered; his blood rilin'.
Words punched through gritted teeth
Passion boiling underneath


S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #506 on: June 08, 2006, 05:34:38 am »
Ennis, not big on endearments, called Jack "Little darlin",
He was hot and bothered; his blood rilin'.
Words punched through gritted teeth
Passion boiling underneath
Of Jack, he was thinking of defiling!
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #507 on: June 08, 2006, 05:35:33 am »
Alma's wardrobe was full of rags,
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #508 on: June 08, 2006, 05:44:16 am »
Alma's wardrobe was full of rags,
Most were selfmade, without tags


S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #509 on: June 08, 2006, 05:47:38 am »
Alma's wardrobe was full of rags,
Most were selfmade, without tags
Never hearing of darts
~A good general knows when to retreat~