Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1144058 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #570 on: June 10, 2006, 08:59:00 am »
His hat covered his embarrassed intent,
But they both knew what it meant,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #571 on: June 10, 2006, 09:01:41 am »
His hat covered his embarrassed intent,
But they both knew what it meant,
Shirtless was Jack,
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #572 on: June 10, 2006, 09:05:54 am »
His hat covered his embarrassed intent,
But they both knew what it meant,
Shirtless was Jack,
Lying on his back,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #573 on: June 10, 2006, 09:08:06 am »
His hat covered his embarrassed intent,
But they both knew what it meant,
Shirtless was Jack,
Lying on his back,
And at it in silence they went.

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S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #574 on: June 10, 2006, 04:00:59 pm »
"Asphyxiation" he had never heard
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #575 on: June 10, 2006, 04:08:25 pm »
"Asphyxiation" he had never heard,
Wondering how he knew such a complex word,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #576 on: June 10, 2006, 04:13:24 pm »
"Asphyxiation" he had never heard,
Wondering how he knew such a complex word,
neither had made it past the 8th grade,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #577 on: June 10, 2006, 04:15:38 pm »
"Asphyxiation" he had never heard,
Wondering how he knew such a complex word,
neither had made it past the 8th grade,
As kids on the farm they had stayed
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #578 on: June 10, 2006, 05:04:35 pm »
"Asphyxiation" he had never heard,
Wondering how he knew such a complex word,
neither had made it past the 8th grade,
As kids on the farm they had stayed,
"He was a real thinker", of that he was assured.
or
To think he knew the meaning, would have been absurd.
« Last Edit: June 10, 2006, 05:21:07 pm by Memento »

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #579 on: June 10, 2006, 05:44:01 pm »
Another:

Ma Twist was aware of her son's ways,