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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3170 on: October 26, 2007, 02:52:48 pm »



They ate the elk and saved the sheep.
At night they shagged and saved the sleep.
Brokeback was their paradise,
A one shot deal to be precise.
 



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3171 on: October 26, 2007, 04:55:22 pm »
They ate the elk and saved the sheep.
At night they shagged and saved the sleep.
Brokeback was their paradise,
A one shot deal to be precise.
Their descent was painful - and very steep.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3172 on: October 26, 2007, 07:24:52 pm »


     Another line.
 The love they shared they couldn't keep.


new one...

Jack chose the crow hopping mare.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3173 on: October 26, 2007, 11:56:53 pm »
Jack chose the crow hopping mare.
"No filly can throw me", he did swear. 

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3174 on: October 27, 2007, 12:19:38 am »

Jack chose the crow hopping mare.
"No filly can throw me", he did swear. 
Ennis warned Jack of her low startle point

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3175 on: October 27, 2007, 01:01:42 am »

Jack chose the crow hopping mare.
"No filly can throw me", he did swear.
Ennis warned Jack of her low startle point
She balked and she jumped hurting his joints



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3176 on: October 27, 2007, 01:45:20 am »
Jack chose the crow hopping mare.
"No filly can throw me", he did swear.
Ennis warned Jack of her low startle point
She balked and she jumped hurting his joints
Jack howled, but the horse didn't care.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3177 on: October 27, 2007, 01:46:29 am »
A new one!  :)

The tent was big enough for two

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3178 on: October 27, 2007, 02:08:30 am »



The tent was big enough for two
Ennis heeded Jack's entry cue





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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3179 on: October 27, 2007, 04:29:10 am »

The tent was big enough for two
Ennis heeded Jack's entry cue
Their love-making reached sublime heights

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