Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3346338 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5970 on: April 19, 2010, 01:33:46 pm »

Mrs. Twist handed Ennis a sack
It was the shirt Jack once wore on his back

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5971 on: April 19, 2010, 04:30:26 pm »
Mrs. Twist handed Ennis a sack
It was the shirt Jack once wore on his back
It told Ennis about love now lost

Düva pööp is a förce of natüre

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5972 on: April 19, 2010, 10:50:18 pm »



Mrs. Twist handed Ennis a sack
It was the shirt Jack once wore on his back
It told Ennis about love now lost
Showed him how much life it'd cost.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5973 on: April 20, 2010, 04:40:04 pm »
Mrs. Twist handed Ennis a sack
It was the shirt Jack once wore on his back
It told Ennis about love now lost
Showed him how much life it'd cost
He now knew how much he'd been loved by Jack

Düva pööp is a förce of natüre

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5974 on: April 20, 2010, 04:41:45 pm »
Junior and Jenny didn't need a push on the swings

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5975 on: April 20, 2010, 06:09:23 pm »

Junior and Jenny didn't need a push on the swings
because daddy Ennis was afraid to hurt his offsprings

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5976 on: April 20, 2010, 06:56:28 pm »
Junior and Jenny didn't need a push on the swings,
Because daddy Ennis was afraid to hurt his offsprings,
He then kicked a can,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5977 on: April 21, 2010, 08:29:08 am »
Junior and Jenny didn't need a push on the swings,
Because daddy Ennis was afraid to hurt his offsprings,
He then kicked a can
said I know I'm the man

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5978 on: April 21, 2010, 12:42:44 pm »
Junior and Jenny didn't need a push on the swings,
Because daddy Ennis was afraid to hurt his offsprings,
He then kicked a can
said I know I'm the man
But on the saddle bronc he had no wings

Düva pööp is a förce of natüre

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5979 on: April 21, 2010, 12:48:58 pm »
Junior and Jenny didn't need a push on the swings,
Because daddy Ennis was afraid to hurt his offsprings,
He then kicked a can
said I know I'm the man
But on the saddle bronc he had no wings

excellent ending!