Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3407599 times)

Offline mariez

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3820 on: October 20, 2008, 05:55:43 pm »
He bent to give Alma a kiss goodbye
she closed her eyes and started to cry
She knew she had lost him
This wasn't just a whim
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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3821 on: October 20, 2008, 06:06:25 pm »
He bent to give Alma a kiss goodbye
she closed her eyes and started to cry
She knew she had lost him
This wasn't just a whim
As she asked herself why why.
 
 
 
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3822 on: October 20, 2008, 06:08:14 pm »
She wished that Texan would go away
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3823 on: October 20, 2008, 08:32:39 pm »
She wished that Texan would go away
Instead of leading her husband astray
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3824 on: October 20, 2008, 09:07:47 pm »
She wished that Texan would go away
Instead of leading her husband astray
Jack nasty she thought
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3825 on: October 20, 2008, 09:15:45 pm »
She wished that Texan would go away
Instead of leading her husband astray
Jack nasty she thought
Feeling so distraught
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3826 on: October 20, 2008, 09:20:54 pm »
She wished that Texan would go away
Instead of leading her husband astray
Jack nasty she thought
Feeling so distraught
Could it be, that they both were gay.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3827 on: October 20, 2008, 09:21:39 pm »
She was sure that they didnt go up there to fish
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3828 on: October 20, 2008, 09:25:54 pm »
She was sure that they didnt go up there to fish
for that was just a forlorn wish.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3829 on: October 20, 2008, 09:29:58 pm »
Hey...great to see you here Rob....

She was sure that they didnt go up there to fish
for that was just a forlorn wish.
When he brought none back
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection