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Author Topic: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll  (Read 3157797 times)

Offline louisev

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4980 on: October 04, 2006, 02:03:43 pm »
Update to "The Red Stallion"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/127688.html  "Chapter 9: Surprises"
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“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4981 on: October 04, 2006, 02:14:03 pm »
Quote from: opinionista on October 04, 2006, 01:16:51 pm
WHOO HEE 500 PAGES!!

only 4 posts away from 5000 posts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4982 on: October 04, 2006, 02:24:31 pm »
whoo wee, well let's make it tonight folks!
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“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4983 on: October 04, 2006, 02:44:22 pm »
Everyone has gone quiet when we are so close to 5000 ...  :P
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4984 on: October 04, 2006, 02:45:18 pm »
..... So am giving it a not-so-subtle nudge ...

1 more to go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Who wants to post the 5000th?  ;D
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4985 on: October 04, 2006, 02:48:06 pm »
Quote from: louisev on October 04, 2006, 01:20:14 pm
First off, the only reason why Ennis isn't blowing her off and kicking her on her wrinkled keester is because she is an old woman, and the wife of the D.A.  And her interest in Ennis is more on the order of a bizarre little quirk of a woman who doesn't know she is being much too obvious about drooling over well built men who are out of reach.  She can't really do him any harm, and she doesn't really have any power over him, nor is she attempting to exercise it.  She is just being a creepy, lusty old woman.


Ah, creepy - that is the best word for Bunny.  I realize that at her 'age', she probably believes what she's doing is harmless flirting and doesn't even understand that what she's doing could be construed as the female version of a lecherous, dirty old man, so to speak.  She did, after all, go beyond ogling at him and got into his personal space and touched him.  
Knowing how Ennis is, as we do, his reaction to her was typical and normal; he did his best to get away from and avoid the embarassing and uncomfortable situation.  He was pretty 'creeped' out and I thought you did an excellent job of portraying that feeling.  At least, that's what I got out of it.  So real - it gave me a moment of 'heebie-jeebies, as well.  Well done.
No worries!
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4986 on: October 04, 2006, 02:53:13 pm »
NV was all business in that 5000th post ..lol ...
Ok..so I'll say it:


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4987 on: October 04, 2006, 02:58:33 pm »
Oh, shit! I just saw that was #5000.  Eeeeek! :o
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4988 on: October 04, 2006, 03:00:35 pm »
Congrats on 5000 posts on the EE thread!!!  :o :o :o. Nite all, nite June. ;) ;) C ya tomorow peeps. xxx
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #4989 on: October 04, 2006, 03:02:15 pm »
YAY!  5000!
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