Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)

[mariez]

David and Jo, y'all are too much! 

InSergiamus, eh?  Sounds like Richard took his big rig over to Lance's house!   

Andale!

Marie

[David]

Don't forget Sergious interuptus.    That's what Francine caused when she stumbled apon the boys upstairs.

[louisev]

okay gang.

I spent a very long night last night organizing my finances and blabbity blah adn all of that...

and got right up again this morning and did more of it, so i am going to take a nap before i get a chapter knocked out.+

In the meantime anyone who hasnt can peruse my original stories, the Laramie Saga Reread, or consider the upcoming publication of my novel "Your Skinny Girl" which is a lighter type of romance in the hetero vein.

Index:  http://louisev.livejournal.com/161282.html

I expect to be putting it out by springtime.

[richardg49]

Don't forget Sergious interuptus.    That's what Francine caused when she stumbled apon the boys upstairs.

And (apologies to Descartes) many of the LS characters could choose this as their personal credo:

coito, ergo sum

[louisev]

I am sure Descartes in private moments might have said the same.

[louisev]

Update!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/208478.html  "40:  The Education of Wayne Bryce"

[louisev]

Update!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/208980.html  "41.  The Nuclear Family"

[mariez]

Update!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/208980.html  "41.  The Nuclear Family"

What a nice very-late lunch surprise! 

Louise, I enjoyed these last two chapters so very, very much.  You really do channel your characters  . . .

Ellery is so Ellery,
Ennis is so Ennis,
Wes is so Wes,
Edna is so Edna,

and

Wayne is so . . . . Wayne!   

I love that Wayne is being treated as part of the family - and not as a mere guest - which is exactly what he needs in order to further his "education" (and exactly what he wants - he just might not realize it yet)!

Great stuff, Louise!

Thanks, Marie

[magicmountain]

Educatin’ Wayne

The mouth never shuts
but that boy’s sure got guts
he smart talks his way to the edge of destruction
He knows how to press
every button and guess
how to drive every person to utter distraction
People cannot perceive
that his heart’s on his sleeve
while his mind flies away in a thousand directions
But Wayne’s met his match
for with instant dispatch
he’ll be reeled in quick sharp for every infraction
Edna will chase
while El’s on his case
and will make sure he reaches a state of perfection
So Wayne will be taught
educated and brought
to Jesus to save him from hell and damnation
And all will calm down
Ennis loses his frown
as Wayne is transformed by enforced education!

[belbbmfan]

What a nice very-late lunch surprise! 

Louise, I enjoyed these last two chapters so very, very much.  You really do channel your characters  . . .

Ellery is so Ellery,
Ennis is so Ennis,
Wes is so Wes,
Edna is so Edna,

and

Wayne is so . . . . Wayne!  

I love that Wayne is being treated as part of the family - and not as a mere guest - which is exactly what he needs in order to further his "education" (and exactly what he wants - he just might not realize it yet)!

Great stuff, Louise!

Thanks, Marie

You're right Marie



SPOILER





Wayne gave Ellery a skeptical sideglance as he trailed him through the hall and into Wes and Edna’s room.

“The sanctum sanctorum, Wayne. Don’t pee on the carpet.”

Wayne sighed, fiddling with the sweater before stripping it off. “It even smells like it’s hetrosexual.”

“Looks that way too, you got a disguise if ya want one!” Ellery grinned, opening the closet door and looking up at the labeled boxes. Jesus Christ I think Wes’s been in every size from skinny ta Santa Clause.” He chuckled. “He might even have a Santa Clause suit up there, that’d be fittin. What a ya want for Christmas, Wayne?”

“A blow job.”




That made me laugh and at the same time feel sad for Wayne 


Thanks for the wonderful chapters Louise