Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition

[Luvlylittlewing]

More and more, during their all too infrequent get-togethers in what had become the late summer of their lives, Ennis and Jack turned reflective and nostalgic towards the past, both of their times together and of their lives generally, and so it came as no surprise when Ennis at one point said, "Ya know, not having finished high school, I missed out on so much of that high school stuff, like datin' and shit...hell, I never even gave a girl a hickey, much less got one"; Jack smiled at his friend's effusiveness that even now could invest him with so much boyishness, at which he replied that, as a fellow dropout, he too had missed out on many of the teenage rites of passage...including hickeys.

"Ya know, Ennis, it's not too late", Jack said with a fresh gleam in his eye, his voice rising to the lilt that colored it when he became excited, continuing with, "Hell, we've never given each other hickeys...how about we make up for lost time?"; at that, Ennis needed no further prodding, and, grabbing his friend's head firmly in his hands, sank his face upon Jack's warm neck, sucking and slightly biting the flesh that felt, at such times as this, like his own.

Jack laughed at the ticklish deliciousness of the sensation, and immediately after returned the favor, noting a little rasp of pleasure coming out of Ennis's throat even as his mouth was upon it; the deed done, the two of them went to look at the results in the mirror of Jack's truck, whereupon they burst out laughing at the massive red marks they had carved on each other, whereupon Ennis said, "Well, we may be old-timers, but those young 'uns got nothin' on us", already contemplating how he would show off the mark to his fellow ranch hands as a trophy from Cassie, while Jack, right then touching his neck with apprehension, began to worry as to how he would explain it later to Lureen.

Wow, moremojo!  I can imagine this happening!  This is a very original, very well written tale!  And I just love the last paragraph, especially, "while Jack, right then touching his neck with apprehension, began to worry as to how he would explain it later to Lureen."  This shows us that Jack, although unhappy in his marriage, was a typical husband! And Ennis using Cassie as a cover.  Lovely work, moremojo.  Looks like just the 2 of us here tonight...so far!   

[moremojo]

I'm glad you enjoyed my little tale, Marie. I thought about it after posting, that hickeys don't form immediately--they need a little time, like a night's worth, to coalesce into their full purplish glory. Just shows you how very long it's been since I've had one! But with an adequate amount of suspension of belief, the story I trust can still be enjoyed.

And Gary, like I was telling Marie, I've gotta admit I'm kind of a porn-hound. I can't help it--I enjoy looking at sexy men, and if I can watch two or more of them together, it's all the more inspiring. I hope no one around here thinks any less of me for it!

Bel Ami's a nice company, though sometimes the models there are a little bit green for my tastes. Beautiful, certainly, but more often than not I like a streak of silver on my foxes!

[Luvlylittlewing]

Hi there littewing and moremojo,

I see you two have posed some new stories.  Great!  But I'm a bit sleepy right now, but I will read them in the morning.  Thanks so much for posting them.   

Gary

P.S.  Did someone mention porn?  I love those Bel Ami boys.   

Have a good rest, Gary, love!  We'll see you tomorrow. 

[Luvlylittlewing]

I'm glad you enjoyed my little tale, Marie. I thought about it after posting, that hickeys don't form immediately--they need a little time, like a night's worth, to coalesce into their full purplish glory. Just shows you how very long it's been since I've had one! But with an adequate amount of suspension of belief, the story I trust can still be enjoyed.

And Gary, like I was telling Marie, I've gotta admit I'm kind of a porn-hound. I can't help it--I enjoy looking at sexy men, and if I can watch two or more of them together, it's all the more inspiring. I hope no one around here thinks any less of me for it!

Bel Ami's a nice company, though sometimes the models there are a little bit green for my tastes. Beautiful, certainly, but more often than not I like a streak of silver on my foxes!

Thanks for sharing, moremojo.  I, too, have forgotten what it is like to get a hickey.  Actually, I only ever got 1 in my entire life, some 35 years ago!    I certainly don't remember how long it takes for one to appear, so no suspension of belief needed on my part!

We will never think less of you, sweets!  A lot of people like porn.  I have no problem with it, myself, and wonder why people build this mystique around a simple, biological function.  But then again, treating sex so clinically takes all the wonder out of it.  I suppose a little mystery and secrecy is needed to keep sex fresh and interesting.

[Toycoon]

"It's late in the day, friend," Ennis said, leaning expectantly to directly face Jack, "but I can be a brother to ya, if that's whatchya want"; and in saying so, he reached out to gently touch Jack's pensive cheek, in the way that Jack had taught him so long ago.

That was very touching, moremojo. Very nicely told with excellent details.

[Toycoon]

He had to follow him down, as Jack’s balls were still in his mouth!  Jack was a bit mortified to lose his balance just as Ennis gobbled him, but how could he stay still after all that?  And the vibrations from Ennis’ deep, throaty chuckles caressed Jack in ways he couldn’t describe.

Littlewing, you are too much lady! Now that's what I call a hummer...

[Toycoon]

“He’ll remember being kissed, that’s for damn sure!”

Littlewing, you are so prolific. You seem to have so many angles on these two fellas. It's astounding!

[Toycoon]

Ennis said, "Well, we may be old-timers, but those young 'uns got nothin' on us", already contemplating how he would show off the mark to his fellow ranch hands as a trophy from Cassie, while Jack, right then touching his neck with apprehension, began to worry as to how he would explain it later to Lureen.

So original, moremojo. Very clever story. How will Jack explain that hickey to Lureen? Maybe you got a part two to your story...

[Dagi]

  And the vibrations from Ennis’ deep, throaty chuckles caressed Jack in ways he couldn’t describe.

Phew, I know who is mortified to loose her balance here, too! Marie, Jack´s moist, blue stare will haunt me the rest of my day  .

Thank you, you incredible woman! We love you, too!

Dagi

[Dagi]

Caps and Facial hair by Littlewing1957

Jack Twist had his “buck” teeth filed down and replaced with caps.  He was feeling fine and grew a shaggy mustache to finish the job.  Jack didn’t think his new look was anything special, but he couldn’t wait to see Ennis’ reaction to his new teeth and his bushy top lip.  Jack appraised his mustache in a small hand mirror.  “Poor Ennis!”  Jack chucked softly.  “He’ll remember being kissed, that’s for damn sure!”

At first Ennis didn’t notice, or he wanted to keep his comments to himself.  Jack ran into his lover’s arms and planted a wet, scratchy one on Ennis' full lips. 

“Whoa, Jack!”  Ennis laughed as he stepped back a bit.  “What is that growin’ on your top lip?”  Jack punched Ennis’ upper arm. “It’s a mustache, Friend.  Do you like it?”  Jack kissed Ennis again for good measure.

“I don’t know, Bud.”  Ennis began, shaking his head.  “I guess it’s okay, just don’t get too carried away with that thing.  It feels like it can hurt, you get too excited!”  Jack laughed uproariously and walked into Don Wroe’s cabin to get settled for the week.  Once all the gear, food and other provisions were put away, Ennis and Jack sat side-by-side on the massive couch to catch up.  Jack told Ennis all about his desire to do something about his buck teeth.  He saved for a long time to pay for the procedure, and was very satisfied with the results.  Jack opened up so that Ennis could see his new caps.

“Looks nice, Bud!”  Ennis said approvingly.  But how do they feel?  How do they taste?  Here, let me see!”  Ennis placed his mouth over Jack’s, and very forcefully, moved his tongue first along the top teeth, and then along the bottom.  He pulled his tongue away, bit at Jack’s mustache, sucked at the dark hairs.  “Very good… tastes good, Jack!  I like em!”  Jack almost fell off the couch, taken aback by the sheer sexiness of Ennis’ actions.

“Well, if you like the taste, you’ll love the feel…down there!”  It was Jack, pointing to Ennis’ groin,  trying his best to catch his breath.  It was Ennis’ turn to fall over!  He pulled at his belt, as Jack’s head went down….

I admit I ´ve never been a fan of mustaches.....but this story is freakin´ sexy nevertheless, dirty mama!! Thank you!

Dagi