Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition

[Toycoon]

Unaccustomed to much kindness, Ennis was slightly taken aback by Jack's offer to cook them elk an' taters stew; Ennis, sitting on the ground, watched as Jack peeled potato after potato, carefully balancing the peeled spuds in a tin plate on a rock next to him, beside his feet.

"Dang, what is it 'bout that feller?" thought Ennis dreamily searching Jack's handsome profile for answers; Ennis stared at Jack's lips noting the way the corners turned up mischievously, curling around the cigarette he was smoking, next his eyes traveled over the surface of Jacks' angular jaw with the bristly hair growing on it, finally he poured over Jack's long delicate eyelashes sweeping over his ruddy cheeks.

Ennis could not restrain himself any longer and grabbed Jack by the shoulders smothering Jack's face with brutal kisses; Jack dropped the potato and it slammed on the edge of the tin plate sending the peeled potatoes flying. The knife flipped up in the air and landed on it's point, sticking straight up in the ground.

[Luvlylittlewing]

“What has gotten into you, Ennis Del Mar?”  Jack asked as he pulled away from Ennis’ attacks.  He wiped at his wet mouth, laughing all the while.  “You keep that up, this meal will never get finished.  The stew won’t cook itself!”  But Ennis reached for him all over again.  He pulled Jack into a strong embrace, kissed him on the mouth, his cheeks.

Jack was trying to control his breathing.  He had never seen Ennis is such a state.  It was at once exciting and frightening.  Jack allowed himself to be hugged and kissed.  After all, he loved Ennis Del Mar and always craved the feel of his lips. 

“Okay, Cowboy?”  Jack asked as Ennis came up for air.  Ennis chuckled softly as he released his lover.  “Look En, I got all the ingredients ready for a good meal.  Elk, potatoes!  And the fire is ready.  This elk stew will be real good."  Ennis winked at reached for Jack's zipper.  “You got anything else good for me to eat, Rodeo?”

[Luvlylittlewing]

Toycoon and littlewing, 

What a tag team you guys are getting to be.  You are two people thinking with the same brain!

Great story, I love it.

Merrily

I love our tag team moments.  I find it so much fun to add to Toycoon's stories!  He is such a good writer!

[Toycoon]

I love our tag team moments.  I find it so much fun to add to Toycoon's stories!  He is such a good writer!

Gosh, thanks cowgirls! You make me feel so good. You all do.
I was having a mopey spell for a while there. I don't like to feel that way, not even for a short time.
I have too much to be thankful for to be unhappy for long.

I love the tag team moments, too, littlewing1957. It really is fun!

[Dagi]

Dagi, this is so beautiful!  For once, I'm at a loss for words!  Thanks so much for this! 

thanks, littlewing and Clyde, it came from my heart.

[Clyde-B]

Dagi,

Usually don't feel I need a cigarette after either peeling potatoes or reading a story!   

(and I quit quite some time ago!)

Now where did I put that church fan?

[Clyde-B]

Susie,

Thanks for giving Ennis somebody new.
I think Jack would have approved too.

[Dagi]

Dagi,

Usually don't feel I need a cigarette after either peeling potatoes or reading a story!   

(and I quit quite some time ago!)

Now where did I put that church fan?

  "Glad you got a kick out a it!" But don´t you dare blame me for starting to smoke again

[Clyde-B]

In a hushed tone John said with his lips close to Ennis’s ear, “You dumbass.  I love Jack, too.  I know he’s a part of you, so lovin’ you means lovin’ him.”

Gary,

I really like tthe way you included the idea that "it was all those that came before that finally brought you to me."

[Clyde-B]

Thank you Dagi honey.  I remember reading a thread over at IMDb about life after Jack, and someone said that they would like Ennis to scatter Jack's ashes and die along side him up on Brokeback Mountain.  And I just thought "NOOOOOOOOOO", that's the worst possible way for the story to end.  Jack would have wanted Ennis to find someone who truly loves him and to be happy.

This isn't my alternate universe, this is how I think the story continues ... and I'm sticking to it!!! (and I love Gary's final chapter ... it's the perfect ending!)


Love Susie  

I agree Susie,

The theme of the sequel could be how to carry on after your true love dies and how to face your own personal truth under extreme conditions.

Do you realize we've never had a successful mainstream story with a gay hero?