Author Topic: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition  (Read 759347 times)

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Re: Fast
« Reply #420 on: June 24, 2007, 02:03:14 pm »
1967. Jack's fast of one thousand, four hundred and sixty days was almost over.

17 Miles-Riverton, WY. Jack floored the gas pedal. He couldn't get there fast enough.

Jack's heart was beating so fast as he climbed out of the old pick-up truck; Jack's heart stopped when he saw Ennis Del Mar appear at the top of the staircase landing and call his name.

No matter how often Im confronted with this scene, my heart always starts to race. How was he able to survive 1460 days without his love, I wonder.

And I wonder how long will we have to wait for your avatar picture? ;)


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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #421 on: June 24, 2007, 02:05:41 pm »

Ah Gary .... do you hate me now??  The problem is with my own insecurities, nothing anyone else says!  <img



Susie, you are so pretty, why the hell are you insecure??

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #422 on: June 24, 2007, 02:53:48 pm »
The archive is up-to-date! pheeewww :P

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The "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Archive
« Reply #423 on: June 24, 2007, 05:32:51 pm »
The archive is up-to-date! pheeewww :P

Thank you, Dagi. The archive makes it easy for folks to read the threads without our usual banter.  ;)

Personally, I love our banter! And of course, I love you too, sweetheart.
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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #424 on: June 24, 2007, 06:31:34 pm »
   The problem is with my own insecurities, nothing anyone else says! 

Susie
 

Well let's see, you have two gorgeous daughters.  The older one looks like she could break hearts if she wanted to and the younger  one  grins like she may be planning on it when she gets older.  You have a son and a husband that, according to another post won't leave you alone.
You have all those curls, a beautiful sunny smile and write like an angel.

Uh... What was it you were insecure about again?

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #425 on: June 24, 2007, 07:15:44 pm »
Well, I think my age might eliminate me from that adventure, but very interesting idea.  Let me know when the details are set.  Unfortunately, my idea of "roughing it" is a Holiday Inn Express.  

 :laugh: ;D :laugh: (Same here, Merr.) :P
The picnic sounds fun!!
"Gettin' tired of your dumbass missin'!"

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #426 on: June 24, 2007, 09:14:47 pm »
If ya'll are going--I'm going. Who's gonna put me up? I can sleep on the couch.  LOL.

Littlewing---what a beautiful picture!!!




Don't worry, Shasta, we'll find a place for you.  And thanks for your kind words about my pic. 
« Last Edit: June 24, 2007, 09:20:32 pm by littlewing1957 »

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #427 on: June 24, 2007, 09:19:36 pm »
:laugh: ;D :laugh: (Same here, Merr.) :P
The picnic sounds fun!!

Ah, there you are, Shasta!  You look amazing, honey!  Thanks for posting! :)

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Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
« Reply #428 on: June 24, 2007, 10:08:29 pm »
Ennis Del Mar walked home from the bus depot loaded down with his personal belongings.  He just finished 4 weeks up near the Tetons for the round-up, and caught the first bus he could catch back to Riverton.  He was walking a bit slower than usual, realizing that his small trailer would not be very welcoming.  There was no one to welcome him home.   Ennis passed by the grocers and debated whether or not he should go in and buy a few groceries.  He was out of most things before he even left for the long job, but he shrugged and decided against it.  He could always go shopping tomorrow.

Ennis flinched as he walked the last block or so to his trailer park.  The streets were dry, rather dusty, devoid of any signs of life, save a small white dog running across the road with its tail between its legs.  The loneliness was even more profound than last night at the ranch when he woke up in a sweat muttering, I want my man!  I want my man!  Ennis cringed at the memory.  He hoped no one heard him!

Safely inside his small home, Ennis placed his gear in the proper places and sat at his small table.  He reached for the postcard that Jack Twist sent him only last month, accepting his invitation to meet up at Don Wroes cabin.  The trip was only 3 weeks away, and just the thought of being with Jack seemed to chase away the lonely feelings.  He prepared himself a simple dinner of franks and beans, all the while holding the postcard like a treasure.  He ate with a light heart and began to smile as he thought of his trip and the laughter, the love, and the tenderness that awaited him.


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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #429 on: June 24, 2007, 10:09:08 pm »
The archive is up-to-date! pheeewww :P

Wonderful, Dagi!  I gotta check it out!  :)