Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition

[Dagi]

Rhythm of the Ocean by Susie

Ennis woke with a start, holding his breath, disorientated, eyes dazed and unfocussed in the cool, early morning mist.  “You glad we finally came to Mexico?” A familiar face smiled up at him, stretching and yawning, grabbing handfuls of soft golden sand and sifting them lazily through his fingers.  Ennis sighed, smiling lovingly at Jack, “You bet”, kissing him gently on the cheek and burying himself back under the blanket.


Susie

Susie, you make feel as if I was lying in the hot sand....what would I give for having Jack by my side  .

Very sensual and erotic, dear! Thank you for thinking of us during your holiday!

Dagi

[moremojo]

Hey honey, you are dirty, but you are far away from being an old man! You resemble rather a horny teenager IMHO  !

Well, I for one still feel like a horny teenager (and a vulnerable one, and a sensitive one), but my forty-year-old body doesn't seem to want to follow suit! 

[moremojo]

Oh, just wanted to add one li'l ole thing...anyone catch any dirty old men lurking in our corner of Storyville, feel free to send 'em on to me! 

[Luvlylittlewing]

Silk and Flesh by Littlewing 1957

I recreated the story to the best of my ability, but I have a feeling the original was better.  Oh well!

Whenever he was lucky enough to spend time with Jack Twist, Ennis Del Mar insisted that they sleep in the nude.  Why waste time, since whatever they wore to bed would certainly come off.  Jack was more than okay with this, as he enjoyed the feel of Ennis' skin, and the warmth it provided.

But one night Ennis climbed into bed wearing the crème colored silk PJs that Jack gave him for Christmas one year.  Jack rubbed Ennis’ chest with a questioning look.  “I’m just tired is all, Bud!”  Ennis began as he grabbed Jack’s roaming hands.  Jack nodded and moved closer.  “That’s okay, Cowboy, you don’t have to do anything.  But there is one thing you can do for me.  Lay down on your stomach.  Can you do that, Friend?”  Ennis smiled as he turned and lay down on his stomach.

Jack placed his entire weight on his lover, slid his entire body over Ennis’ still form.  Jack placed his hands over Ennis’ and squeezed.  He held his lover's hands in a tender embrace.  He kissed his husband's neck.  Ennis knew what Jack was up to, but he couldn’t fight.  He lay still as Jack placed tender, sloppy kisses alternating with tiny bites along his shoulders.  Jack blew at the line of saliva that dotted Ennis’ shoulder to dry it, and continued with the kisses and bites.  Ennis felt the swell of Jack’s manhood against his buttocks.  And when his own cock pressed up against the king sized mattress, Ennis reached around and removed his pajama bottoms in one motion…

[BBM-Cat]

Wow - silk, flesh, and flames! Where is the fire extinguisher?? Good grief  - Your story should have come with a warning label!

You all amaze me with your stories and creativity - I am new to these parts of the forum though not to Bettermost. I can only read back so many pages at a time - it's like sensory overload (of the positive kind). Great job littlewing and everyone else who has taken the time to create stories that help us reconnect with Jack and Ennis.

I would like to try my hand (or keyboard rather) at posting a little story, 3 sentences of course    I certainly do not want to post right after littlewing though - let's let that one cool off a bit...

[Toycoon]

Hey there BBM-Cat,
Nothin' to be afraid of; we won't bite (hard). Everyone has to start somewhere. It's really a lot of fun once you get started. You'll see how addicted you'll become to erotic fanfic. That's why I make the stories only three lines long. They're just easier to manage that way!

Toycoon

[Toycoon]

I don't know how you continue to come up with so many imaginative, original tales, Littlewing.
I love the way you have Jack refer to Ennis as his 'husband'. It is so bizarre that they spent so much time togeher but never officially committed to one another.
I want to write a tender sequel to 'Silk and Flesh' but I don't know that I have enough energy tonight. 

[moremojo]

Congratulations on resubmitting your story, Marie! See...I knew you could do it.

And as sensual as always...the touch of silk is one of the most sensory experiences human beings have had access to...and one can only imagine how Ennis might have felt slipping into those silken garments for the first time. It must have felt like heaven (and Jack being there wouldn't have been bad either  ).

This one line really stood out:

He kissed his husband's neck.

They really were husbands, weren't they? They had the sanction of neither church nor state, but they were wedded in their hearts, and had found in each other that rarest of treasures...one's true soulmate.

[Toycoon]

Silk and Flesh (part 2) by Toycoon

"I jes' ain't got the will tonight, buddy," grumbled Ennis, "I hadda work overtime every day this week and I'm looking at a long week come Monday morn." Ennis hated to waste even a second of valuable time with his precious, Jack, but he was just worn out and it seemed nothing could restore his energy.

Jack succeeded in arousing Ennis by pressing and massaging Ennis' weary back, his shoulders and his buttocks; Jack's firm hands felt so good to a man who rarely enjoyed a fortuitous caress by anyone.

The mixture of smooth, creme colored silk on sensitive flesh proved to be too much for Ennis because he rolled over to face his long time lover, slid his silk pajamas down over his thighs and arched his back to thrust his erect cock into Jack's face.

[Luvlylittlewing]

Wow - silk, flesh, and flames! Where is the fire extinguisher?? Good grief  - Your story should have come with a warning label!

You all amaze me with your stories and creativity - I am new to these parts of the forum though not to Bettermost. I can only read back so many pages at a time - it's like sensory overload (of the positive kind). Great job littlewing and everyone else who has taken the time to create stories that help us reconnect with Jack and Ennis.

I would like to try my hand (or keyboard rather) at posting a little story, 3 sentences of course    I certainly do not want to post right after littlewing though - let's let that one cool off a bit...

BBM-Cat, you are so sweet!  Thanks so much for your kind words.  You know, I can't get enough of writing about Ennis and Jack.  I'll be forever grateful to my dear sweet Toycoon for starting this thread.  I was slow to get started, but now I can't seem to help myself.  I try to post at least 1 story a night.  I'm looking forward to reading a spicy tale from you!  I have a feeling that you're a very talented writer.  Thanks so much for joining us!