Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3236037 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2630 on: February 26, 2007, 09:31:22 am »
The kiss, not expected, was joy to Jacks heart,
Medicine to sooth the 4 years apart,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2631 on: February 26, 2007, 05:05:53 pm »
The kiss, not expected, was joy to Jacks heart,
Medicine to sooth the 4 years apart.
In one moment, all their cares were lost


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2632 on: February 26, 2007, 07:08:51 pm »
The kiss, not expected, was joy to Jacks heart,
Medicine to sooth the 4 years apart.
In one moment, all their cares were lost
they both *knew* what mattered the most:

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2633 on: February 26, 2007, 07:47:35 pm »
The kiss, not expected, was joy to Jacks heart,
Medicine to soothe the 4 years apart.
In one moment, all their cares were lost
they both *knew* what mattered the most:
To be reunited with one's counterpart!

They stood close, squeezing the breath out of each other
« Last Edit: February 26, 2007, 07:51:09 pm by Fran »

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2634 on: February 26, 2007, 08:54:05 pm »
They stood close, squeezing the breath out of each other,
Lips pressed hard, to nearly a smother,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2635 on: February 27, 2007, 04:21:49 pm »
They stood close, squeezing the breath out of each other,
Lips pressed hard, to nearly a smother.
Fondest wish turned to truth,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2636 on: February 27, 2007, 06:23:02 pm »
They stood close, squeezing the breath out of each other,
Lips pressed hard, to nearly a smother.
Fondest wish turned to truth,
Lonely, wounded hearts to soothe


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2637 on: February 27, 2007, 06:33:22 pm »
They stood close, squeezing the breath out of each other,
Lips pressed hard, to nearly a smother.
Fondest wish turned to truth,
Lonely, wounded hearts to soothe
Someone was watching but they didn't bother...

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A new one:

Their kiss, it seemed to last forever 

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2638 on: February 28, 2007, 08:43:56 am »
Their kiss, it seemed to last forever 
A kiss they thought, would happen never,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2639 on: February 28, 2007, 02:49:00 pm »
Their kiss, it seemed to last forever
A kiss they thought, would happen never,
The world seemed to pass them by