Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1306375 times)

Offline Pipedream

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #450 on: June 06, 2006, 03:41:28 pm »
He'd never felt so sick in his life,
And just as bad: He'd soon have a wife!
What the hell should he do?
Knowing Jack's love was true
He went sullen with this inner strife.

 :'(


S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #451 on: June 06, 2006, 04:11:43 pm »
That was a sad one ...  :-\

Something more upbeat:

I will lay me down with my Ennis tonight,





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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #452 on: June 06, 2006, 04:23:54 pm »
I will lay me down with my Ennis tonight,
When all the stars are shining bright,

Offline ThePirateBride

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #453 on: June 06, 2006, 04:34:38 pm »
I will lay me down with my Ennis tonight,
When all the stars are shining bright,
Nothing could be easier
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #454 on: June 06, 2006, 05:12:17 pm »
I will lay me down with my Ennis tonight,
When all the stars are shining bright,
Nothing could be easier
Than being bawdier
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #455 on: June 06, 2006, 05:14:27 pm »
I will lay me down with my Ennis tonight,
When all the stars are shining bright,
Nothing could be easier
Than being bawdier.
Tonight is the night I will do him right!


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Offline Mikaela

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #456 on: June 06, 2006, 07:31:00 pm »
Time to start another one?


The snow barely lasted an hour,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #457 on: June 06, 2006, 08:22:56 pm »
The snow barely lasted an hour,
Yet Joe issued an order so dour

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #458 on: June 06, 2006, 08:25:01 pm »
The snow barely lasted an hour,
Yet Joe issued an order so dour,
Jack began t otake down the tent,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #459 on: June 06, 2006, 08:50:07 pm »
The snow barely lasted an hour,
Yet Joe issued an order so dour,
Jack began t otake down the tent,
Ennis started to vent,
~A good general knows when to retreat~