Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1215434 times)

Offline Snowflakes

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #540 on: June 09, 2006, 01:36:33 pm »
Baby girls and a boy were born,
But their lives were still torn.
'Cause one of their own
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

Offline ThePirateBride

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #541 on: June 09, 2006, 01:56:53 pm »
Baby girls and a boy were born,
But their lives were still torn.
'Cause one of their own
Could never be sown
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #542 on: June 09, 2006, 02:27:41 pm »
Baby girls and a boy were born,
But their lives were still torn.
'Cause one of their own
Could never be sown
And that, 'til death, they both would mourn.
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #543 on: June 09, 2006, 02:29:28 pm »
On the end she tied a little note,
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #544 on: June 09, 2006, 02:32:23 pm »
On the end she tied a little note,
Any chance he wouldn't see it, very remote.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #545 on: June 09, 2006, 02:45:49 pm »

On the end she tied a little note,
Any chance he wouldn't see it, very remote.
It didn't get wet,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #546 on: June 09, 2006, 02:48:44 pm »
On the end she tied a little note,
Any chance he wouldn't see it, very remote.
It didn't get wet,
He was too busy with Jack to fret.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #547 on: June 09, 2006, 02:53:26 pm »
On the end she tied a little note,
Any chance he wouldn't see it, very remote.
It didn't get wet,
He was too busy with Jack to fret.
and he tried not to come home and Gloat.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #548 on: June 09, 2006, 02:57:48 pm »
ANother:


He slowly went up to Jack's bedroom,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #549 on: June 09, 2006, 03:24:40 pm »
He slowly went up to Jack's bedroom,
Feeling reverant as if in a tomb,