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Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 4129239 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3500 on: August 27, 2008, 07:26:34 pm »
The 24th of June was a stormy day
But Jack still red lined it all the way
Ennis paced the floor
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Offline Fran

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3501 on: August 27, 2008, 07:32:48 pm »

The 24th of June was a stormy day
But Jack still red lined it all the way
Ennis paced the floor
Wonderin' what was in store
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3502 on: August 27, 2008, 09:39:37 pm »

The 24th of June was a stormy day
But Jack still red lined it all the way
Ennis paced the floor
Wonderin' what was in store
But when he saw Jack he did not delay
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3503 on: August 27, 2008, 11:19:04 pm »
At the top of the stairs, his arms open wide
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3504 on: August 27, 2008, 11:21:25 pm »
At the top of the stairs, his arms open wide
"Jack fuckin Twist" he so lovingly cried



sorry, couldnt resist doing two lines....
 
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3505 on: August 28, 2008, 07:10:00 am »

At the top of the stairs, his arms open wide
"Jack fuckin Twist" he so lovingly cried
down the stairs he did run
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Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3506 on: August 28, 2008, 08:27:28 am »
At the top of the stairs, his arms open wide
"Jack fuckin Twist" he so lovingly cried
down the stairs he did run
his shirt, coming undone
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3507 on: August 28, 2008, 08:30:20 am »

At the top of the stairs, his arms open wide
"Jack fuckin Twist" he so lovingly cried
down the stairs he did run
his shirt, coming undone
and then kissed him, after stepping to the side
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Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3508 on: August 28, 2008, 05:48:54 pm »
(let's keep this one going!)


Hidden by the stairs, not pausing for breath
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3509 on: August 28, 2008, 07:25:41 pm »
Hidden by the stairs, not pausing for breath
Kissing each other a matter of life and death



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