Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3287750 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4010 on: December 02, 2008, 06:01:29 am »
After 20 years had past

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4011 on: December 02, 2008, 04:09:14 pm »




After 20 years had past
The red letters, made him downcast



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4012 on: December 02, 2008, 04:56:28 pm »
After 20 years had past
The red letters, made him downcast
And though he would try
He felt a part of him die
"Laß sein. Laß sein."

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4013 on: December 02, 2008, 09:53:18 pm »




After 20 years had past
The red letters, made him downcast
And though he would try
He felt a part of him die
His grief would be everlast



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4014 on: December 03, 2008, 06:15:00 am »



After 20 years had past
The red letters, made him downcast
And though he would try
He felt a part of him die
His grief would be everlast
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4015 on: December 03, 2008, 09:31:34 am »

Jack loved a little dog
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4016 on: December 03, 2008, 01:36:37 pm »
Jack loved a little dog
And he played with the puppy as he sat on a log
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4017 on: December 03, 2008, 09:06:55 pm »




Jack loved a little dog
And he played with the puppy as he sat on a log
They stood guard as he napped.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4018 on: December 04, 2008, 11:52:18 am »
Jack loved a little dog
And he played with the puppy as he sat on a log
They stood guard as he napped.
and the sheep did feel trapped.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4019 on: December 04, 2008, 01:57:04 pm »




Jack loved a little dog
And he played with the puppy as he sat on a log
They stood guard as he napped.
and the sheep did feel trapped
But,  Ennis left him feeling agog.



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