Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3396652 times)

Offline mariez

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3630 on: September 26, 2008, 09:20:14 am »
He thought about that "old, cold time"
When he and Jack were in their prime
Meeting up was easy then
Up on that mountain, for the two lonely men
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3631 on: September 26, 2008, 09:27:35 am »
He thought about that "old, cold time"
When he and Jack were in their prime
Meeting up was easy then
Up on that mountain, for the two lonely men
When love was theirs sublime.


(I liked that one....well, i like em all, but that one made me feel all fuzzy and romantic)
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3632 on: September 26, 2008, 09:28:18 am »
The morning after, he rode away
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3633 on: September 26, 2008, 02:07:08 pm »
The morning after, he rode away
With a heavy heart that was full of dismay
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3634 on: September 26, 2008, 02:47:44 pm »
The morning after, he rode away
With a heavy heart that was full of dismay
He couldnt face what happend that night
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3635 on: September 26, 2008, 03:13:38 pm »
The morning after, he rode away
With a heavy heart that was full of dismay
He couldnt face what happend that night
It seemed so surreal in the morning light
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3636 on: September 26, 2008, 04:46:35 pm »


   
The morning after, he rode away
With a heavy heart that was full of dismay
He couldnt face what happend that night
It seemed so surreal in the morning light
Their lives inextricably mixed after that day.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3637 on: September 26, 2008, 05:51:34 pm »
No ones business, but ours, Jack said
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3638 on: September 26, 2008, 09:47:16 pm »
No ones business, but ours, Jack said
Sensing Ennis's mood of dread
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3639 on: September 26, 2008, 10:06:59 pm »
No ones business, but ours, Jack said
Sensing Ennis's mood of dread
Ennis said, "I aint queer"
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection