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Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3650 on: September 30, 2008, 06:23:58 pm »
They lay together in the afterglow
body heat was warming the snow
It felt like they were flying in the mountain air
Just loving each other, without a care
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3651 on: September 30, 2008, 06:33:22 pm »

They lay together in the afterglow
body heat was warming the snow
It felt like they were flying in the mountain air
Just loving each other, without a care.
Let it be so, let it be just so.





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He died alone by the road side
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3652 on: September 30, 2008, 06:45:33 pm »
He died alone by the road side
His devastation, Ennis could not hide
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Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3653 on: September 30, 2008, 06:46:49 pm »
He died alone by the road side
His devastation, Ennis could not hide
His mind went back to another time
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3654 on: September 30, 2008, 06:56:38 pm »
He died alone by the road side
His devastation, Ennis could not hide
His mind went back to another time
When everything was so sublime
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3655 on: September 30, 2008, 07:03:00 pm »
He died alone by the road side
His devastation, Ennis could not hide
His mind went back to another time
When everything was so sublime
He hung his head and cried and cried.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3656 on: September 30, 2008, 07:04:57 pm »
Dont order soup, the Basque had said
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3657 on: September 30, 2008, 07:10:33 pm »
Dont order soup, the Basque had said
Preparing them for the weeks ahead
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3658 on: September 30, 2008, 07:17:10 pm »
Dont order soup, the Basque had said
Preparing them for the weeks ahead
Beans will do, Ennis was thinkin
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3659 on: September 30, 2008, 07:21:02 pm »

Dont order soup, the Basque had said
Preparing them for the weeks ahead
Beans will do, Ennis was thinkin
Jack's appetite thought that was "stinkin'"
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Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!
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