Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3672537 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5070 on: October 22, 2009, 01:54:16 pm »
The dead sheep gave Ennis a shock after FNIT

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5071 on: October 22, 2009, 02:55:57 pm »
The dead sheep gave Ennis a shock after FNIT,
Guts everywhere, he thought he would shit!








Sorry, I really don't know whether to rhyme with fnit or tent  ???
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5072 on: October 22, 2009, 03:19:31 pm »
The dead sheep gave Ennis a shock after FNIT,
Guts everywhere, he thought he would shit!
His innocence gone,







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Sorry, I really don't know whether to rhyme with fnit or tent  ???
I vote for "fnit".

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5073 on: October 22, 2009, 04:12:19 pm »

I vote for "fnit".

That's what I intended.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5074 on: October 22, 2009, 04:13:49 pm »
The dead sheep gave Ennis a shock after FNIT,
Guts everywhere, he thought he would shit!
His innocence gone,
No going back, he had to move on

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5075 on: October 22, 2009, 08:09:11 pm »
The dead sheep gave Ennis a shock after FNIT,
Guts everywhere, he thought he would shit!
His innocence gone,
No going back, he had to move on
Unable to quench the fire Jack had lit

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5076 on: October 23, 2009, 01:34:36 pm »
Ennis knew how much Alma and the girls liked fish

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5077 on: October 24, 2009, 08:56:20 pm »
Ennis knew how much Alma and the girls liked fish
But he never brought them any, despite her wish
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5078 on: October 24, 2009, 10:40:51 pm »
Ennis knew how much Alma and the girls liked fish
But he never brought them any, despite her wish
He took his creel case,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5079 on: October 25, 2009, 07:07:12 am »
Ennis knew how much Alma and the girls liked fish
But he never brought them any, despite her wish
He took his creel case
his mind in a haze

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