Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3289355 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5280 on: November 17, 2009, 05:45:05 pm »



          That grilled hot elk meet tasted so damn good,
          'twas better than beans, let it be understood,
          The mood changed with all the good eating.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5281 on: November 17, 2009, 05:47:59 pm »
Diverging limerick!!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5282 on: November 18, 2009, 01:33:54 pm »
Let's Double Limerick again!   :D

No. 1:

That grilled hot elk meet tasted so damn good,
'twas better than beans, let it be understood
When bears interfere with picking up supplies
A brand new plan they must devise



No. 2:

That grilled hot elk meet tasted so damn good,
 'twas better than beans, let it be understood,
 The mood changed with all the good eating.
And the moment wasn't fleeting
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5283 on: November 18, 2009, 02:34:29 pm »
No. 1:

That grilled hot elk meet tasted so damn good,
'twas better than beans, let it be understood
When bears interfere with picking up supplies
A brand new plan they must devise
So they did the only thing they could



No. 2:


That grilled hot elk meet tasted so damn good,
 'twas better than beans, let it be understood,
 The mood changed with all the good eating.
And the moment wasn't fleeting
When they came down Ennis opened Jack's hood.


(not very coherent, I know... ::)  But you're all welcome to try and find two words with the same rhyme!!  ;) ;D)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5284 on: November 18, 2009, 05:07:40 pm »

Those are great, Sonja!   :)


The summer continued, the days flew by
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5285 on: November 18, 2009, 05:11:53 pm »
Thanks Marie!!  :)


The summer continued, the days flew by
When it was time to leave the mountain they both wondered why

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5286 on: November 18, 2009, 05:34:08 pm »
The summer continued, the days flew by
When it was time to leave the mountain they both wondered why
But snow had come early that year

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5287 on: November 18, 2009, 05:58:16 pm »
The summer continued, the days flew by
When it was time to leave the mountain they both wondered why
But snow had come early that year
And they'd forgotten the bell to keep away the bear

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5288 on: November 18, 2009, 06:30:16 pm »
The summer continued, the days flew by
When it was time to leave the mountain they both wondered why
But snow had come early that year
And they'd forgotten the bell to keep away the bear
So for almost twenty years they both lived a lie.
"Laß sein. Laß sein."

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5289 on: November 18, 2009, 06:34:52 pm »
The summer continued, the days flew by
When it was time to leave the mountain they both wondered why
But snow had come early that year
And they'd forgotten the bell to keep away the bear
So for almost twenty years they both lived a lie.
look what misery a forgotten bear bell can cause! Sonja!  :laugh: :laugh:



Ok. A new one.



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