Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3357252 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5730 on: February 18, 2010, 07:37:16 pm »



Ennis shot a coyote, balls on him the size of apples
Told Jack that he could probably eat himself a bunch a camels.






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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5731 on: February 19, 2010, 04:07:34 pm »

Ennis shot a coyote, balls on him the size of apples
Told Jack that he could probably eat himself a bunch a camels
But Jack just opened the can

Düva pööp is a förce of natüre

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5732 on: February 19, 2010, 04:59:41 pm »
Ennis shot a coyote, balls on him the size of apples
Told Jack that he could probably eat himself a bunch a camels
But Jack just opened the can
Tried hard not to watch the man
"Laß sein. Laß sein."

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5733 on: February 19, 2010, 05:25:22 pm »
Ennis shot a coyote, balls on him the size of apples
Told Jack that he could probably eat himself a bunch a camels
But Jack just opened the can
Tried hard not to watch the man
And resisted the impulses with which he grapples.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5734 on: February 19, 2010, 05:29:01 pm »
Uncle Harold did not have pneumonia,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5735 on: February 19, 2010, 06:25:08 pm »
Uncle Harold did not have pneumonia,
But Aguirre's visit did herald a coda
"Laß sein. Laß sein."

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5736 on: February 19, 2010, 06:30:30 pm »
Uncle Harold did not have pneumonia,
But Aguirre's visit did herald a coda
Quite unexpected, they were to leave the mountain

Düva pööp is a förce of natüre

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5737 on: February 19, 2010, 09:20:55 pm »
Uncle Harold did not have pneumonia,
But Aguirre's visit did herald a coda
Quite unexpected, they were to leave the mountain,
Two times the syllables needed, Sonja.  But heck, who's countin'?
A companion where none had been expected...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5738 on: February 19, 2010, 09:41:55 pm »
Uncle Harold did not have pneumonia,
But Aguirre's visit did herald a coda
Quite unexpected, they were to leave the mountain,
Two times the syllables needed, Sonja.  But heck, who's countin'?
That'd be me, Gwyllion, despite avolition and anhedonia.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5739 on: February 19, 2010, 10:31:24 pm »
Limericks really have a kind of structure,