Author Topic: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition  (Read 2121256 times)

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Re: Dance of the Drums
« Reply #1580 on: August 18, 2007, 04:50:30 pm »
... if you really had time to spread your wings, Lord knows what wonderful places you would take us ... brilliant!

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Susie, you are a poet!

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Re: Holiday Snaps
« Reply #1581 on: August 18, 2007, 06:04:25 pm »
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: ... you crack me up Gary .. how d'you get to be so clever??

Most of the Americans they met were lovely, if a little full-on for them.  They did have another unfortunate incident.  They were standing at a bus stop in Las Vegas and someone drove by and threw an egg at the shelter.  Mum and Julia were really shocked and couldn't understand why someone would do that ... then this woman turned to them and said "Think yourselves lucky it wasn't a bullet!"

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Hi Susie! It's just like Gary said; most Americans LOVE the British! The next time your sister and your Mom travel to the US, tell them to visit Indiana. We all love British people here!  :D

I'm so sorry they had this negative experience in our country. It makes me sad. I hope they will give us another chance.  :)
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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #1582 on: August 18, 2007, 06:13:08 pm »
Leslie the moderator, dropping in to say hello...

I don't know if you guys realize it, but this thread has become the 10th most posted on thread here at Bettermost. You knocked off the "Let's get real here: NC17 rated fun" which has been in the number 10 place for ages...and has been dormant for ages. You came along and passed that thread in no time at all! You even passed the drabblefest!

Good work, fanfic game players!

And now, your mission, is to move up the ladder....LOL

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Re: Ticklish?
« Reply #1583 on: August 18, 2007, 06:14:44 pm »
Porn without Plot?  ... sounds perfect Dagi, I can't wait!

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Ticklish?  Part 3 by Dagi

Ennis stopped breathing and closed his eyes for a moment, then turned around, avoiding looking Jack in the eye, and swung one leg over Jack´s shoulder with his warm, red butt still on Jack´s thighs.

Jack got all serious as he saw Ennis´s face, eyes closed again, lips twitched, until they opened a little and a low moan escaped from them.....he spit in his hand and rubbed softly over Ennis´s hole, causing his lover to moan a little louder, but with still clenched teeth.

“Ennis....Ennis!...........Relax, sweetheart, relax your jaw....” He reached over and stroked softly over Ennis´s chin. “Yeah, friend, that´s better....let me hear you.......s´that good?” He stroked some more over the hole, Ennis´s gasped, then closed his mouth again, “Mmmmmm....”

“Hey, do I have to tickle you again? Ennis, I want ta hear you, open your mouth....” He stretched his legs and placed both hands under his friend's butt, lifting him up until the tip of his own hard cock  touched his friend's wet, sensitive spot, and he didn´t hesitate a second, couldn´t hold back, but entered his lover  until his whole length had vanished inside his man, both of them crying out loud.

Ennis shook a little, then began to rock in small movements, all the while whimpering like a puppy calling for its mommy. Jack looked down at his man in rapture, took in all the tiny details of this beloved face, the now wide open dark brown eyes, the blond curls, the always clenched lips, now finally parted and soft and wet.....he looked further down, the strong chest with those tiny nipples, the flat stomach... and these incredibly beautiful, rock-hard eight inches rising just in front of him, a little drop of precum dripping down the shaft.....mmmm, if he could just....he bent down a little further, lifted  Ennis up a little higher until he managed to lick over the swollen tip.

“Geez, Jack, what the fuck....ooaaaaaahhhhh!” Ennis groanedd, encouraging Jack to go on alternately lifting Ennis up sucking on the head and pushing him down shoving his own cock all the way up into his man, until Ennis´s cries became so loud Jack wasn´t sure anymore if he was crying with lust or with pain, but he couldn´t stop himself, and the moment he felt his lover's warm, delicious semen fill his mouth he himself came hard, shooting his load deep inside Ennis's guts.

Jack licked his lips, smiled mischievously and said “ I think I punished you for good, ....huh?”
« Last Edit: August 18, 2007, 06:27:15 pm by Dagi »

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #1584 on: August 18, 2007, 06:20:07 pm »
Leslie the moderator, dropping in to say hello...

I don't know if you guys realize it, but this thread has become the 10th most posted on thread here at Bettermost. You knocked off the "Let's get real here: NC17 rated fun" which has been in the number 10 place for ages...and has been dormant for ages. You came along and passed that thread in no time at all! You even passed the drabblefest!

Good work, fanfic game players!

And now, your mission, is to move up the ladder....LOL

L

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #1585 on: August 18, 2007, 06:29:33 pm »
Leslie the moderator, dropping in to say hello...

I don't know if you guys realize it, but this thread has become the 10th most posted on thread here at Bettermost. You knocked off the "Let's get real here: NC17 rated fun" which has been in the number 10 place for ages...and has been dormant for ages. You came along and passed that thread in no time at all! You even passed the drabblefest!

Good work, fanfic game players!

And now, your mission, is to move up the ladder....LOL

L

Hey Leslie, thanks so much for letting us know.....that is great news!

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #1586 on: August 18, 2007, 07:30:51 pm »
Leslie the moderator, dropping in to say hello...

I don't know if you guys realize it, but this thread has become the 10th most posted on thread here at Bettermost. You knocked off the "Let's get real here: NC17 rated fun" which has been in the number 10 place for ages...and has been dormant for ages. You came along and passed that thread in no time at all! You even passed the drabblefest!

Good work, fanfic game players!

And now, your mission, is to move up the ladder....LOL

L

Hey there Miss Leslie,
10th Most Posted Thread? Sheee-it! What an honor! Ya know we had ten chapters (twenty pages each volume) of the Jack with Ennis FanFic game goin' on at IMDb before we got shut down by the morality police. What can I say but we are an imaginative and horny, tightly knit bunch when it comes to Jack with Ennis. Thank you for hosting us and providing us with a cozy home. I'd like to salute everyone who has contributed so heartily and faithfully over the years (yes, it's been more than a year since we started the game).
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Re: Ticklish?
« Reply #1587 on: August 18, 2007, 07:39:26 pm »
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Jack got all serious as he saw Ennis´s face, eyes closed again, lips twitched, until they opened a little and a low moan escaped from them.....he spit in his hand and rubbed softly over Ennis´s hole, causing his lover to moan a little louder, but with still clenched teeth.

Excellent Dagi! This story certainly did have a happy ending. Boy, that Jack is always full of exciting surprises. I reckon Ennis was full of Jack this time! Now I see what you meant about "all action, no plot'. Who needs a friggin' plot when yer gettin' plugged and slugged!
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Re: Holiday Snaps
« Reply #1588 on: August 18, 2007, 08:40:46 pm »
Hey David sweetheart,

So nice to see you here!  .... I'm still waiting on that steamy fanfic from you!  Well my mum and sister are already saving for their next trip to the USA!!  My friend was in Indianapolis all last summer and had a wonderful time .... you didn't happen to bump into Gary and Sandra Cook and their little girls did you??

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Hey Susie! Nope, I sure don't remember meeting anyone named Gary and Sandra last year. I wish I had though. I'm glad they had a good time here. Indianapolis isn't the most exciting place to visit, but most of us are very friendly and like I said, we love people from England! And Scotland.... and Wales... and Northern Ireland! We LOVE British people! Oh, and my boyfriend is from England. He likes it here too. Maybe someday you can come over and visit us Susie!  :D

I loved your pictures you posted of your recent vacation. You know your way around a camera Susie. You did a brilliant job at photographing all those places down there! I really liked the pictures of Tintangel.  I hope I spelled that correctly! :D
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Re: Something Precious
« Reply #1589 on: August 18, 2007, 09:17:18 pm »
Something Precious by moremojo

"Nineteen...turn twenty come September," answered Ennis to Jack's query about his exact age, a bit puzzled as to why he would even want to know, and finding himself namelessly drawn to the kind, sympathetic spirit he discerned in his new friend's eyes, whereupon Ennis cast his eyes down to the breakfast fire, stirring the embers aimlessly with a stick.

Jack sensed a discomfort in his work companion, and felt a twinge of regret to think he might have been the cause of it; Jack had seen a fair amount of life in his brief years, and had assumed that someone like Ennis, coming from such a similar background, had done the same...clearly this summer on the mountain would prove different from last year, when Jack had had no problem coaxing Dave, his assigned mate, into some on-the-side fun when Aguirre wasn't around.

"You're a bit older'n me," Jack stated, taking a healthy gulp from his coffee mug, continuing with "I turn twenty in October..the thirty-first, to be exact...Halloween!", whereupon he flashed a buck-toothed grin to Ennis to lighten the mood; there was something about Ennis, something different from all the other guys Jack had known and sometimes played with, that inspired a deep tenderness in his heart that was almost unbearable in its sweetness...this Del Mar fellow deserved something more than a rough and passing tumble, the intimation of which Jack felt all the more keenly as he gingerly patted Ennis's back, the first time he had dared to do so, as he prepared to set off for the sheep.

Moremojo, this is very lovely!  I feel as though I'm right there with the boys..it is as though this exchange actually took place.  You have done a few things here: 1) establish that Ennis is the older 2) given us the boy's birthdates 3) told us that Jack was experienced, and had fun with a co-worker the previous summer 4) gave an explanation of why Jack fell in love with Ennis.  I love how you fill in the gaps for us, mormojo, and I especially like how you do it.  Extraordinary!