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Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 4121983 times)

Offline stonebiscuit

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4440 on: June 14, 2009, 07:18:10 pm »
If one or more were to analyze Alma's reaction
She's obviously stunned by Ennis and Jack's attraction
Like a kick in the gut
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4441 on: June 15, 2009, 02:22:12 pm »
If one or more were to analyze Alma's reaction
She's obviously stunned by Ennis and Jack's attraction
Like a kick in the gut
Or a heart that's been cut
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4442 on: June 15, 2009, 07:22:57 pm »



If one or more were to analyze Alma's reaction
She's obviously stunned by Ennis and Jack's attraction
Like a kick in the gut
Or a heart that's been cut
From that day, she could get no marital satisfaction.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4443 on: June 16, 2009, 06:34:42 am »
Jack came on home, no more Mexico drawn
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4444 on: June 16, 2009, 02:36:29 pm »


Jack came on home, no more Mexico drawn
Fell into his bottle, Ennis's pawn.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4445 on: June 18, 2009, 03:01:07 pm »

Jack came on home, no more Mexico drawn
Fell into his bottle, Ennis's pawn.
No solution in sight
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4446 on: June 19, 2009, 06:27:05 am »



Jack came on home, no more Mexico drawn
Fell into his bottle, Ennis's pawn.
No solution in sight
life became a huge fight
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4447 on: June 19, 2009, 02:45:09 pm »
Jack came on home, no more Mexico drawn
Fell into his bottle, Ennis's pawn.
No solution in sight
life became a huge fight
The only ease in dreams of times foregone
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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4448 on: June 19, 2009, 09:18:46 pm »
It's said that on Brokeback it snows in the summer
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4449 on: June 20, 2009, 09:06:48 pm »
Quote from: mariez on June 19, 2009, 02:45:09 pm
Jack came on home, no more Mexico drawn
Fell into his bottle, Ennis's pawn.
No solution in sight
life became a huge fight
The only ease in dreams of times foregone

   Excellent finish Marie.....

Now back to our regularly scheduled program...........
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