Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 4059202 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3880 on: October 28, 2008, 01:10:18 am »

When he reached his destination, Jack said "Wow!"
Ennis shoved him under the stairs anyhow.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3881 on: October 28, 2008, 01:37:36 pm »
When he reached his destination, Jack said "Wow!"
Ennis shoved him under the stairs anyhow.
They placed on each other a buck-toothed liplock,
And Alma was about to get a tremendous shock
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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3882 on: October 28, 2008, 01:49:49 pm »

When he reached his destination, Jack said "Wow!"
Ennis shoved him under the stairs anyhow.
They placed on each other a buck-toothed liplock,
And Alma was about to get a tremendous shock
Opened the door thinking "where did Ennis go now?"


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3883 on: October 28, 2008, 05:35:28 pm »
It was a real long ride from tent to sheep
Too much commutin', not enough sleep
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3884 on: October 28, 2008, 06:41:39 pm »
It was a real long ride from tent to sheep
Too much commutin', not enough sleep
Jack didn't like it, not one bit
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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3885 on: October 28, 2008, 07:37:55 pm »
t was a real long ride from tent to sheep
Too much commutin', not enough sleep
Jack didn't like it, not one bit
He wanted more time with Ennis, to laugh or just to sit
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3886 on: October 28, 2008, 09:41:21 pm »



It was a real long ride from tent to sheep
Too much commutin', not enough sleep
Jack didn't like it, not one bit
He wanted more time with Ennis to laugh, or just sit.
Ennis was willing to switch, without a peep.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3887 on: October 28, 2008, 09:43:08 pm »



Brokeback Mountain developed love for two.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3888 on: October 28, 2008, 10:08:25 pm »
Brokeback Mountain developed love for two.
Completely alone, and out of view
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3889 on: October 28, 2008, 10:28:54 pm »


Brokeback Mountain developed love for two.
Completely alone, and out of view
Found a love, where none was expected.



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