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Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3357318 times)

Offline mariez

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4430 on: June 10, 2009, 08:27:10 pm »
Out of sight, not out of mind
Across the miles, their lives entwined
Few words they ever spoke
As they both dragged on a smoke
Dreading the moment they'd leave each other behind
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4431 on: June 11, 2009, 05:21:42 am »
A young lad went down to Mexico
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4432 on: June 11, 2009, 05:34:32 pm »




A young lad went down to Mexico
After he was  dealt a deathblow
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4433 on: June 13, 2009, 12:03:13 pm »
A young lad went down to Mexico
After he was  dealt a deathblow
It didn't ease the pain
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4434 on: June 13, 2009, 12:41:27 pm »
A young lad went down to Mexico
After he was  dealt a deathblow
It didn't ease the pain
Only added guilt and shame
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4435 on: June 13, 2009, 07:53:41 pm »




A young lad went down to Mexico
After he was  dealt a deathblow
It didn't ease the pain
Only added guilt and shame
His love left distraught, his wife a widow


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4436 on: June 14, 2009, 12:50:00 am »
Quote from: ifyoucantfixit on June 13, 2009, 07:53:41 pm
A young lad went down to Mexico
After he was  dealt a deathblow
It didn't ease the pain
Only added guilt and shame
His love left distraught, his wife a widow

Oh what a tragic tale! Thanks guys!
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4437 on: June 14, 2009, 01:01:18 am »


 ( I thought it turned out well too...we did good.  start us another one.)
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4438 on: June 14, 2009, 11:22:18 am »
If one or more were to analyze Alma's reaction
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4439 on: June 14, 2009, 03:16:56 pm »


If one or more were to analyze Alma's reaction
She's obviously stunned by Ennis and Jack's attraction
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