Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3396533 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4340 on: May 09, 2009, 08:10:53 pm »
"Life ain't fair," his father had often said
So sad but true, now Jack was dead
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4341 on: May 10, 2009, 04:11:08 am »
CONFUSSED//??

"Life ain't fair," his father had often said
So sad but true, now Jack was dead
And early on he knew it was true
He phoned Lureen to see what happened



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4342 on: May 10, 2009, 04:27:01 am »
"Life ain't fair," his father had often said
So sad but true, now Jack was dead
And early on he knew it was true
He phoned Lureen to see what happened
And she said, no one is making this limerick rhyme.
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4343 on: May 10, 2009, 06:07:27 pm »
LOL!  We usually manage the rhyme but mess up the meter. Let's try this since I am sad about leaving New York:

"Time to get goin, Cowboy." was all it took.
"Laß sein. Laß sein."

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4344 on: May 10, 2009, 07:54:45 pm »
"Time to get goin, Cowboy." was all it took.
One last embrace, one long last look
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4345 on: May 11, 2009, 02:28:22 pm »
"Time to get goin, Cowboy." was all it took.
One last embrace, one long last look
Once every four years
"Really, it's not mine..."   --- Austin Powers

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4346 on: May 11, 2009, 02:36:26 pm »
"Time to get goin, Cowboy." was all it took.
One last embrace, one long last look
Once every four years
'Cuz they ain't no queers,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4347 on: May 11, 2009, 05:20:59 pm »
"Time to get goin, Cowboy." was all it took.
One last embrace, one long last look
Once every four years
'Cuz they ain't no queers,
They'd go fishing' with a pole but no hook.
"Really, it's not mine..."   --- Austin Powers

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4348 on: May 11, 2009, 05:52:57 pm »
"Time to get goin, Cowboy." was all it took.
One last embrace, one long last look
Once every four years
'Cuz they ain't no queers,
They'd go fishing' with a pole but no hook.

Ver' good, SuperD!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4349 on: May 11, 2009, 06:41:23 pm »


   I wrote the line I had written to the one before, because there were two lines for the same space.  I was
trying to show people they had to pay attention to the ones that had gone before.  ????



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