Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3353866 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3680 on: October 03, 2008, 07:25:55 am »
OK....that explains it......I have always preferred Ang's version than Annie's.....

now where were we.......

He had big, nicked hands and ragged hair
Looked like he had come accross a bear
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3681 on: October 03, 2008, 09:58:04 am »
He had big, nicked hands and ragged hair
Looked like he had come accross a bear
it made Jack all hot


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3682 on: October 03, 2008, 10:40:29 am »
He had big, nicked hands and ragged hair
Looked like he had come accross a bear
it made Jack all hot                                  (dam Chucky, u horny devil)
A boner he got                                (now look, u got me the same way)
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3683 on: October 03, 2008, 10:46:15 am »

He had big, nicked hands and ragged hair
Looked like he had come accross a bear
it made Jack all hot                                 
A boner he got
and one night, he got to touch Ennis "there".


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3684 on: October 03, 2008, 10:50:02 am »
He had big, nicked hands and ragged hair
Looked like he had come accross a bear
it made Jack all hot                                 
A boner he got
and one night, he got to touch Ennis "there".

Oh, I was hoping you would write the last line Chucky......very good....very good...... :o :o
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3685 on: October 03, 2008, 10:51:01 am »
Ennis sat on the hill looking sad and alone
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3686 on: October 03, 2008, 01:29:34 pm »
He had big, nicked hands and ragged hair
Looked like he had come accross a bear
it made Jack all hot                                 
A boner he got
and one night, he got to touch Ennis "there".

 :laugh: :laugh:  Good one!


Okay... where were we ...


Ennis sat on the hill looking sad and alone
Everything about him as still as a stone
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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3687 on: October 03, 2008, 02:47:54 pm »
Ennis sat on the hill looking sad and alone
Everything about him as still as a stone
Jack reached for his rope


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3688 on: October 03, 2008, 05:13:23 pm »


Ennis sat on the hill looking sad and alone
Everything about him as still as a stone
Jack reached for his rope
They tumbled down the slope.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3689 on: October 03, 2008, 07:27:37 pm »
Ennis sat on the hill looking sad and alone
Everything about him as still as a stone
Jack reached for his rope
They tumbled down the slope.
They were facing a life of unknown.

 
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection