Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3396267 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3440 on: January 07, 2008, 12:16:26 am »
Ennis asked Alma Jr. if Kirk really loved her
As emotional thoughts began to stir
 "yeah daddy he loves me." She replied
He thought of Jack, and tears he cried
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3441 on: January 07, 2008, 11:43:58 am »
Ennis asked Alma Jr. if Kirk really loved her
As emotional thoughts began to stir
 "yeah daddy he loves me." She replied
He thought of Jack, and tears he cried
His bitterness and pain is never over.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3442 on: January 07, 2008, 07:13:21 pm »
He awoke with a merciless headache


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3443 on: January 08, 2008, 06:29:31 am »



He awoke with a merciless headache.
Wondering inwardly if he'd made a mistake.





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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3444 on: January 08, 2008, 05:27:19 pm »
He awoke with a merciless headache.
Wondering inwardly if he'd made a mistake.
His jeans were around his knees,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3445 on: January 08, 2008, 05:56:17 pm »


He awoke with a merciless headache.
Wondering inwardly if he'd made a mistake.
His jeans were around his knees,
He checked outdoors the surrounding trees.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3446 on: January 10, 2008, 02:03:27 pm »
He awoke with a merciless headache.
Wondering inwardly if he'd made a mistake.
His jeans were around his knees,
He checked outdoors the surrounding trees.
He watched Jack, suddenly wide awake.



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Junior said her Ma was awful strict


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3447 on: January 10, 2008, 08:11:14 pm »
Junior said her Ma was awful strict
Said, causing a  little bad conflict
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3448 on: January 11, 2008, 01:58:58 am »


Junior said her Ma was awful strict
Said, causing a  little bad conflict
She asked "daddy could I stay with you?"



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3449 on: January 11, 2008, 02:06:11 am »
Junior said her Ma was awful strict
Said, causing a  little bad conflict
She asked "daddy could I stay with you?"
We'd be happy, just us two
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection