Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3289359 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3450 on: January 11, 2008, 06:27:09 am »
Junior said her Ma was awful strict
Said, causing a  little bad conflict
She asked "daddy could I stay with you?"
We'd be happy, just us two
Sadly, negative, he gave his verdict.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3451 on: January 11, 2008, 08:05:12 am »
Jack said "sit down, you son of a bitch"
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3452 on: January 11, 2008, 10:25:34 am »
Jack said "sit down, you son of a bitch"
His forceful manner making L.D. twitch.
« Last Edit: January 11, 2008, 10:00:11 pm by ifyoucantfixit »



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3453 on: January 11, 2008, 06:05:12 pm »
Jack said "sit down, you son of a bitch"
His forceful mannor making L.D. twitch.
He had had enough of his bullying ways
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3454 on: January 11, 2008, 07:54:13 pm »
Junior said her Ma was awful strict
Said, causing a  little bad conflict
She asked "daddy could I stay with you?
We'd be happy, just us two."
Her daddy's answer she did predict.






Next (continuing the one above):

"Naw, I'm too busy these days," he said


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3455 on: January 11, 2008, 08:43:57 pm »
"Naw, I'm too busy these days," he said
So get that notion out of your head



I guess I will just finish off the other one that was started......(whatcha doin Lucise??)

Jack said "sit down, you son of a bitch"
His forceful mannor making L.D. twitch.
He had had enough of his bullying ways
Sick of listening to what he says
I hope he ends up in the bottom of a ditch.






Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3456 on: January 12, 2008, 04:28:23 am »
New one

Ennis checked out Jack's boots, but found shirts instead


For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3457 on: January 12, 2008, 06:03:07 pm »



Ennis checked out Jack's boots, but found shirts instead
The room had a window, a closet, and Jacks childhood bed.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3458 on: January 12, 2008, 06:17:25 pm »
I guess I will just finish off the other one that was started......(whatcha doin Lucise??)


Very good point, don't know what happened there.
Thing is, sometimes when you click on a post from a forum(the one showing as latest post) on the main page, it sometimes takes you to one that is on the page before.
Anyone noticed that before?  I bet that is what happened here. 
My apologies guys!  ;)


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3459 on: January 12, 2008, 06:37:48 pm »



       DONT SWEAT THE SMALL STUFF.  This is just for fun!!!!!!!!



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