Damn, Louise - I already knew you were an excellent writer and a brave writer by virture of the Laramie Saga - but - wow! You've got guts! LOL! I had long ago given up on trying to "predict" where you're going. But I must say, even though I knew things would be complicated and difficult (can't tell a good story without conflict, right?) - I had no idea of the deep, disturbing turns the story would take. A person who regards themselves as "poison" is a person in deep, deep pain.
It's such a pleasure to read the thoughtful, enlightened comments on this thread. What an articulate, intelligent group your readers are! I find myself nodding in agreement while I'm reading. I just can't be angry with Nick, either - it's just too sad, too disturbing, and, frankly, too depressing.
I am anxious to see how this will all play out. Only really, really good writing can affect readers so deeply, Louise.
Thanks - Marie